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Sentence-Level Mechanics Courses
Adverb Overuse
Redundancy & Wordiness
Sentence Variety
Passive Voice
Unclear Pronouns
Run-on Sentences
Flat Description
Show vs. Tell (Naming vs. Showing emotions, physicality, and sensory detail)
Anchoring Emotion in Action
Overexplaining
Missing Image Hierarchy
Neutral POV Description
Style & Clarity Courses
POV and Head Hopping
Identifying the Strongest Image in a Sentence
Structure & Scene Craft Courses
Lack of Scene Anchoring
Dialogue Weakness
Dialogue That Sounds Like People
Info-Dumping
Flat Conflict
Rhythm, Tension, and Flow (Does the image preserve scene momentum?)
Scene Grounding and Movement
Backstory Without Breaking Momentum
Stakes, Desire, and Tension
Punctuation That Works Course
Punctuation That Works