Learn how to identify the strongest image in a sentence. Discover how to spot cluttered description, find the image that carries emotional weight, and trim your prose for clarity, rhythm, and impact. Includes before-and-after examples and quick fixes.

Learn how to fix confusing or cluttered descriptions in your writing. Discover what image hierarchy is, why it matters, and how to guide your reader’s eye through a scene with focus, pacing, and clarity. Includes examples and quick fixes.

Learn how to avoid head hopping in writing. See clear examples of POV shifts, discover why head hopping confuses readers, and get simple tips to keep your point of view consistent so your scenes stay immersive and easy to follow.

Learn how to avoid neutral point of view in writing. See examples of neutral vs. character POV, discover why neutral description feels flat, and get practical tips to filter scenes through your character’s eyes for deeper, more engaging prose.

Learn how to show emotions through action in writing. See examples of naming vs. showing emotions, discover why labels fall flat, and get practical tips to anchor feelings in body language, objects, and voice so your characters come alive.

Learn how to avoid overexplaining in writing. See examples of common overexplaining mistakes, discover why it weakens your prose, and get practical tips to trust your readers, cut clutter, and keep your sentences clear and confident.

Learn how to show emotions, physicality, and sensory detail in writing. See examples of telling vs. showing, discover why naming emotions falls flat, and get simple tips to bring your characters and scenes to life.

Learn how to fix flat description in writing. See examples of lifeless vs. vivid description, understand why description falls flat, and get simple tips to add sensory detail, POV, and energy so your scenes come alive.