Learn how to identify the strongest image in a sentence. Discover how to spot cluttered description, find the image that carries emotional weight, and trim your prose for clarity, rhythm, and impact. Includes before-and-after examples and quick fixes.

Learn how to fix confusing or cluttered descriptions in your writing. Discover what image hierarchy is, why it matters, and how to guide your reader’s eye through a scene with focus, pacing, and clarity. Includes examples and quick fixes.